Tuesday, November 30, 2010

Shimmer [REVISION]




Shimmer

If only I sat in a room of a dream.
Empty a year ago, the
sofa now provides new
comfort, and the table
a new place to eat.
It echoes with a shimmer, a shattering hush!

A dull roar hums at the start of a button.
A light glow flickers on
unfinished walls, and voices
linger amidst popcorn air
soon after the glow ends.
When the roar is silenced, voices faint but never leave.

Thursday, November 18, 2010

Revision Poetry: Tips and Tricks


November 16th, 2010, I attended a seminar detailing tips and helpful suggestions on revising poetry.This was the main gist of what was talked about, and I thought it would be nice to share with you guys. =)